III

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a spring day we had hoped forー

ricefields & mountains

mountains & ricefields

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2 Responses to “III”

  1. Aaa, this sounds like my OKA YAMA, mountains and hills, hills and mountains …

    Greetings from the Paradise Hermitage

    GABI

    GokuRakuAn
    http://ohaga.blogspot.com/2005/10/gokurakuan.html

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  2. Unsure whether or not others’ screens will show them, but mine shows ‘possibly related posts (automatically generated)’, which have nothing to do with Gerald’s nice haiku or anything else at all. If you can see them, don’t be misled by clicking any of them, please! Nice use of ampersand ‘&’, sometimes works well for a pair of nouns in a haiku, and more economical of space than ‘and’ itself.

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