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3 Responses to “First taste of winter: Kurama to Kibune”
The third haiku, with its curious yet contemporary west-east juxtaposition of bench/snowman and Kyoto, has truly caught my fancy – although I’ve never met a noisy one! Thanks.
I was drawn into sensing what that “snow man” was experiencing as he looked quietly toward Kyoto. Good stuff here: for me, the coexistence of an ordinary temporary presence (created from a season), perhaps the scene of KYOTO in all its glory (past and/or present). uhuhuhuuuu……