how cold the guard dogs
at the entrance to this shrine
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very nice imagery with this one, I am imagning it now
can’t imagine anything colder
This is because the dogs are made of stone?
Great! Moonlight and coldness wonderfully captured in the image of the frozen guard dogs… Isn’t the last line a little long: why not ‘at the shrine entrance’….
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