The fluttering knock
Green cherries wet with rain.
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Challenging. A ‘knock’ in the head? Memorable, certainly. I can almost taste the sourness of those firm little cherries. A fine seasonal reference. Thank you for your knock of comments elsewhere.
Thanks, Tito! e.
Excellent poem. We are in our dry season here, so the image of rain brings a longing. I can almost smell the rain.
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