I like the images, very striking. The effect would be even more powerful if these were streamlined to the essential elements and presented closer to haiku form–not necessarily 5-7-5 but with the fat cut out.
Thank you, Tito, for the two wonderful poems from Sri Lanka. They catch impressive moments of your journey – so vivid that I feel that I am with you sharing the tropical heat and rain. However, I am also interested in knowing about your journey as a whole. Why don’t write a piece of haibun to satisfy my (I should probably say our) appetite? I myself enjoyed a journey to England through the Internet this summer. It was a a good way to forget the tremendous heat of this summer. Amazingly, the Internaet has tons of information about the the places I want to visit. Allow me to take this opportunity to thank you for your postcard from Sri Lanka.