Morning dew …
Its clear, transparent drops:
If only I could run
Without stepping on them
With my white shoes.


I ate Manoa lettuce full of dewdrops for my breakfast.


9 Responses to “Manoa”

  1. Have slightly edited the Eng. version as ‘dews’ is seldom, if ever, used. Unsure how to avoid the ‘without’ followed by ‘with’. ‘in’ didn’t seem to work. I too have composed poetry while jogging!
    By the way, are you living in Oahu or just visiting?

    • Mahalo your editing, Tito. This time I am staying a little longer, but a few more days now.

  2. Beautiful tanka! Without the title ‘Manoa’, I would have thought this was written somewhere in Japan.

    Q to Stephen: You mentioned ‘in’ didn’t seem to work. What do you mean?

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