Hong Kong Black

 

 

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A cirku is a haiku laid out in the form of a circle (to be read clockwise). It should work as a poem from whichever of the three line-spaces you start.

Thus, (reading from the :00 position) ‘long before dawn / a pack of stray dogs / baying me on my way’, or (from the :17 position) ‘a pack of stray dogs / baying me on my way / long before dawn’, or again (from the :38 position) ‘baying me on my way / long before dawn / a pack of stray dogs’: each works. Whichever image comes last is emphasized.

The haiku was written 12 years ago as I night-climbed Lantau Peak (Fung Wong Shan), Hong Kong. The pack of stray dogs was scary, for I was alone, but I made myself think that they were actually cheering me on! I reached the summit (934m) as dawn broke over the South China Sea and took the photo there.

 

7 Responses to “Hong Kong Black”

  1. Ursula Maierl Says:

    lovely

  2. Beautiful, I love the way the cirku rises with the sun above the landscape 🙂

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  4. Very nicely done. The image of being alone as a pack of dogs trails me is most disconcerting.

  5. Mayumi Kawaharada Says:

    Beautiful!
    Now I understand some more about how to compose Cirku rather than usual Haiku. It’s a very skillful work.

  6. I like that the Cirku offers a engaging quality to it. However, I wouldn’t want to be alone on a mountain, near a pack of baying dogs.

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