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severe cold
bringing a numbness
one more mass killing
Adelaide B. Shaw
between holidays
less space needed
for this year’s cards
Adelaide
At the bend
A hundred fresh trees —
Spring
Published. Thanks!
summer sky…
a restless cloud swimming
in a pool of water
dawn–
creation’s beauty for the eye
to see the “I”…
This one popped at me while I was walking on the streets, at a particularly busy time. I got impatient at some point and decided to change my focus so as not to dance on the spot and getting people’s undesired attention; so, instead, started watching people’s faces and when I was becoming too insistent, just found something else to do…checking out loud the number plates and …
lo! “EYE 007”, a brand new flamboyant, orange and strange shaped car that swished as fast as the driver was allowed to go, inspite of his wish to stand on the speed pedal, I more than guessed by checking out with his taut looks, even at this young hour of the morning.
Well, that brought me to a stillpoint within for a split of a second-I checked my watch.I still had ten minutes before me to spare and this time, I looked up at the sky and noticed for the first time after I set my nose out, the most beautiful morning with an incredible palette of pink, peach and orange sky over my head. I backed off and I stood motionless and gulped in with awe at what surrounds us in every way and everyday.
I took in religiously the new feelings, the peace and the inspiration that was given to me in those precious minutes and bartered out my doubts, my weaknesses, one by one, to this unforgettable moment.
dawn —
to You, Goddess
I bow
…..
Brinda,
Thanks. Although Icebox will consider haibun from non-contributors, it might have been better to have submitted this to the Genjuan International Haibun Contest. Details are found through the page link at top right of our top page. Send another haibun piece or two there?
Tito, Hi!
I am sorry, I completely forgot about this!
I have noted your comments and will do so,
deep winter
blending the color
of sky and stone
first frost
each facet of the web
in brief detail
Michael, Thank you for your fine contributions. “deep winter” chosen for the new ‘inbox’ selection.
Thank you Tito for some reason I must have missed the email
M.H.L.
Texas winter
The winds howl
but only leaves and rain
fall
(Jane Wieman)
inchworm~
little by little
the lenghtening day
Published. Thanks!
tiny insects with a big bite, also known as sand fleas outside of the Southern U. S.
first day of spring
the no-see-ums
show themselves
Petal by petal
the blossoms fall
making way
for verdancy to come
(Heights Blvd. Jogging Trail, Jane Wieman)
Silky envelope
Light folds its origami
At dawn your wings hatch.
The surface of you.
A lake skinned with sky essence.
Light fastens us here.
JFK
Too soft their voices
for me to hear their words
of next door neighbors
this Night of the Full Worm Moon
(Jane Wieman, Texas)
Thanks, H, for posting this for hand writing Jane! I will do another Inbox soon and this is the one I’d choose of Jane’s recent three. Kitt Stephenson has just visited her in Houston, apparently, and she seemed to be herself. More when I see you…
Across my heart
the night worm scribbles hours
ink pours from the moon
Published. Thanks!
thank you
joker’s moon
always laughing
to keep from crying
skim milk
what the cat’s don’t know
won’t hurt them
(From Kamome)
Again and again
From inside the fuchsia bush,
A young dunnock (1) calls.
Model shop closing (2) –
In the vacated window
Batman stands alone.
(1) hedge sparrow – its call is ‘Seep, seep’.
(2) ‘Modelzone’ is a chain of stores now in administration. Another familiar high-street name gone.
Thanks in advance,
Kamome
After a hike on hill
cotton balls brushes my face
with a sudden spell of rain.
Neelam,
Hisashi Miyazaki has just chosen this haiku to post in the latest ‘from the Icebox inbox’ on the top page. Although 5-7-5 in structure, the omission of the definite article in the first line was unnatural, so we have inserted it. Likewise, plural subject in the 2nd line requires the cutting of ‘-es’. It might not be a bad idea to cut ‘with a’ from the last line, too (with your permission), leaving a clear break between the 2nd and 3rd lines?
We would both like to know what exactly you meant by ‘cotton balls’ (perhaps the rain falling on your cheeks felt like the little pads of cotton used by women to remove make-up?). I am guessing! Whatever, it is both sensual and mysterious. Thanks!
I also agree with Tito to remove ‘with’ of the third line, which makes the poem a complete haiku by juxtaposition. I think that the cotton ball is a cotton aphid (an insect), a winter-kigo.
Thanks. I accept that editing this haiku will make it more clear. I certainly means here the spell rain creates after a hike on hill. Thanks for cooperation.
OK. Have removed ‘with’ as agreed. But what are the ‘cotton balls’? You never explained. Thanks for the new submission.
cotton balls are small fluffy balls from simbal trees (that grow them as fruit) in the hills. Thanks.
winter fog-
stretching a lane
the bald trees
structure based on concept of modern haiku.
neelam, gerald has chosen the first of these to post in the inbox. thanks, as ever
late autumn
still bagging up
last years leaves
New Year’s wind
blowing blowing
blown
Michael, thanks, as ever, for your nice contributions. Gerald has posted the 2nd … and the autumn wind one from a fortnight later
leaping salmon
sunlight falls to the rocks
gerald has posted this. thanks. please tell us your family name as there are several other haiku martins we know!
autumn wind
a swimming pool’s worthl
of bare trees
sunlight skims the bench
beneath the maple’s shadow-
almost time to leave
wind rustles the leaves
branches like dry, brittle bones –
leaving home again
floating down the dark river
in my tiny boat–
who is that, singing?
gerald has posted this one. thanks
thank you!
in the length of a breath shooting star
Thanks, Martin. Gerald chose this haiku for the latest ‘inbox’ posting. Can we have your family name, please, as there may be confusion with Martin Lucas, mentioned in posts last month
A snow dusted field—
Cicadas sleep in silence
dreaming of summer.
Low lying mauve clouds
glow, higher, white and pale grey
Gold glimpse of rising sun
(The sunrise on New Year’s Day/初日の出, Jane Wieman)
No bird in sight –
On the snow drifted balcony
Proof of their passing (Jane Wieman)
fresh spring dew
after the first date
parting ways
a field of tulips
taking a tumble
a rainbow
Not annoymous post. Previous post did not log in properly.
first spring day
flowers on the covers
of the books
march whim
rose prickles
in frost
Ice break of your soul
anger pouring out in stones –
early June hail storm
ikebana —
hands weave
the silence
Japanese cultural topic… I wonder if “weave” is the most meaningful verb for this poem?
Thanks for your input, Gerald. I was trying to keep it simple. The only other thing I can come up with, which might insert more meaning:
ikebana –
hands gather
the silence
Best,
Theresa C.
Thanks for including the first version in #32.
Best,
Theresa
tapping water
from my brush
temple bell
Hi, just received word that this one is being published in BHS, not sure what the rules are so just letting you know,
Regards
Nicole
shelling peas
sun fills the colander
on grandma’s step
Hello, I would like to become a contributor to icebox. Here is a haiku
Spiced egg plant
Fragrant Indian bread
Washed down with mango-panna
*
Summer rain
Paper boats
Bobbing up and down
Thanks, Payal, for the haiku. As to becoming a contributor, we always require a fairly long period of input (submissions and comments) first before the eds. consider inviting someone to join us as a regular contributor and allowing him to post directly to the top page. The contributors are mainly those who reside, or have resided, in Kansai (CW Japan) and have already contributed to the Hailstone Haiku Circle. Nothing is impossible, though, so we look forward to getting to know you a bit better in this way.
Thanks for the reply. I have noted your advice and keeping in mind, I’m posting 3 haiku.
Roaring clouds
Lashing rain
Swimming spiders
Winter morning
Butterfly
Frozen on a leaf
Heavy downpour
Zara heels
Ruined
Contrast and subtle surprise in the second poem. I wonder if this poem could be a two line poem, or a one line poem?
Hello, Gerald. Thanks for the feedback. On playing around with the words, I realised that the second poem could have a two line structure. So, here goes :
Winter morning, butterfly
Frozen on a leaf
2 new haiku for posting
Strong Cuban coffee
Reading erotica
Late winter evening
Walk-in closet
Kaleidoscope of colours and textures
Napping mouse
Its shrouds removed
the fountain stands ornate
When will water flow?
(Jane Weman)
Hello, Gerald. Thanks for choosing my haiku for the latest lcebox inbox 32.
2 new haiku:
Snow mountains
Poking
Cloud line
Desert plains
Galloping horses
Last rays of sun
.
.
slow-drifting clouds
out of the lebanon cedar
a discussion of crows
Alan Summers
.
.
cherry blooms
teasing each other
in spring breeze
white snow drifts
from black sky
blanketing my face
the setting sun’s rays
on a carousel horse –
unicorn ride
a puddle of blood
after the impact –
yellow flowers watch
the pause
he takes on his flute –
spring rain
**
narrow road
the clash of umbrellas
as we near the Buddha
**
rock to rock
leaping in blue water
an emerald frog
hawling wind
the baby bucket
give me a tattoo
lying together
after the spring thunderstorm
blossom and hailstones
long tailed tits
gathering in the hawthorn
first flurries of snow
From Jane Wieman in Madison (6 July ’14):
Lightning flickers
almost out of sight
hidden by the trees
Thunder in the distance
(or as might be late fireworks)
Time for bed
Hi Tito,
I would like to submit an account of a haiku walk. Should I post it here or I can be provided with an email. I can be found at Facebook, http://www.facebook.com/NeelamHere
Thanks.
Dear Editor,
Here is one haibun, I am submitting. Thanks.
Linking to Nature at P.N. Botanical Garden
Changing environment has its impact and many Indian states including Punjab, Chandigarh, Delhi and Haryana are witnessing hot waves still in August while the monsoon commences well by the end of July.
With a little cool weather, the only favourable thing was to go for a garden walk. P. N. Botanical Garden is situated in Sector – 14, Punjab University, Chandigarh where one can find arboretum, bambusetum, cactus house, fern house, growth room, lily pools, orchid house and plametum. Ms. Neelam Dadhwal, a haiku poet from Chandigarh visited the garden recently.
Despite warming levels, there was dense moss beneath the specific zones of bamboo, pines and palms. The grass in wide and far was covered with common goldstar that choosing the natural pathways was not an option. Certainly one can find seasoned woods with lichen, ant holes with leaves, and above branches from stoic stems of one tree expanding to the other.
Lit with seasonal flowers like verbena, cassia, cape jasmine, snapdragons, gomphrenas, and zinnia, it became easy to leave the world’s troubles behind and rejuvenate as the nature brings life and vigour too.
There was absence of snails, earthworms and birds like kingfisher in and by the lily ponds where the lotuses were spread and vibrated their scent, definitely soothing the nerves and a perfect place to pen haiku.
between you and me
this nod…
snapdragon
The Moon
riding down toward the Western horizon
a bright cradle
for the deepening night
Here by the pool
where no one swims
voices of cicadas
rise
Firefly twilight
one…, two…, three…, even four…
in the courtyard
after Ping-Pong
(Jane Wieman, in Madison)
writing circle
the slow melt
of the ice prompt
green leaves
cradling in its bosom –
bird’s nest
summer ends
counting cicada calls
on one hand
endless heat
some rainbow sherbet
after the rain
army ants
across a killing field
of clover
salty dreams
a sand crab gently rocks
my hammock
Hi ! Days are getting shorter, slowly
making space for more Haiku season…Thank you for the wonderful variety here…
this November sky–
the brush stroke explodes into
the watercolour puddles
sometimes a ray
sometimes a frown –
the moment freezes
mists gather as
pearls on the window –
birdsongs slow down
solitary feather–
the breeze cradles
with care
summer midday–
the crow wonders
sudden shower
*****
border fence–
the sparrows fly
all around
*****
fall colors
an inner city
in blues and reds
autumn winds
the deep sigh in
a glass of sherry
camellia blooms
how is it
we’ve come this far
first frost
the scarecrow guards
a fallow field
harvest moon
a line stars to form
at he food bank
oos last poem should read
harvest moon
a line starts to korm
at the food bank
early morning
uneven feet zig-zag
along the icefield
***
mid afternoon
snow sliding off
dark limbs…
***
winter night
fragrance of saffron
permeates the kitchen
***
Have selected ‘early morning’ for inbox (Feb. ’15). Thanks! Where were you, I wonder?
morning mists carry
messages from afar —
Thanksgiving feast
loners gather dew —
the empty highway waits
in silent docility…
black friday —
the back garden recovers
from belated hangover…
***********************
* Black Friday, rather …
gleeming coals burn to ash–
the day begins
as a new slate
Have selected ‘gleaming coals’ for inbox (Feb. ’15). Corrected ‘gleeming’. Thanks!
Brinda, are you based in the UK or in India?
Thank You, Tito…sorry for the typo…!
Paris, France for the moment….
A tanka received via snail-mail from Jane Wieman in Madison, WI:
true “sky blue”
beyond bare branches …
the scrape, scrape, scrape
of a shovel
clearing away snow
Keith A. SIMMONDS
Rodez, FRANCE
grey clouds
cover the tiny village…
trickling snowflakes
distant clouds
loiter in the deep snow…
frozen footsteps
serenity
in the silent bourg…
glistening snow
Have selected ‘grey clouds’ for inbox (Feb. 15). Thanks!
Many thanks for accepting this piece for Inbox, February 15,2015!
myriad footprints
incrusted in the pavement
crumbling snowflakes
fauna and flora breathe
after a snow shower —
bold ink strokes
a treasure hunt —
cautiously eating a slice
of the French king’s cake*
a king or a queen —
after the cheer and bubbles
the gloomy sky of winter
*referring to the Galette des Rois, a custom of eating an almond-filled pastry to celebrate Epiphany, wherein is hidden a porcelain figurine and the person having it( mostly enjoyed by kids) is supposed to wear a golden paper crown – symbolical of royalty….
the sun frolics
upon the snow-capped roofs…
shimmering sketches
blue sky-
her raven hair float
in red sea
***
through open window
full moon bath
young lovers’ with silver
come morning, they are
bathed in red…
Summer road’s open
still littered with last year’s leaves—
The sound of foot steps
rainbow looms —
houses soak in muddy waters
up to their waists …
Independence Day —
thunderstorms open the sky
with odd fireworks …
denim sky
a seagull zipping
by the window will
***
temple yard
a devotee chasing pigeons
summer afternoon
.
fleeting rain
the scarecrow ducks
into a doorway
.
stumbling cosplayer
she finds her Klingon
comes to the rescue
.
Vincente Minnelli
a girl’s costume flickers
Till the Clouds Roll By
.
Alan Summers
.
autumn breeze
walking the curve
of the labyrinth
morning mist
the blackbird and me seeking
a piece of sky
zoo visit…
after the downpour
a rainbow of macaws
impossible to write
the lyrics to your song
skylark
night train
the stranger and I
aynchronise watches
first snowflakes
how gently you settle
on my mind
overnight rain…
the sound of trees
drip-drying
Selected for Inbox 35. Thanks. hisashi
a pink butterfly
upon a cherry blossom…
abundance of light
between the notes the ridge expands
kissed by midnight lamp her right shoulder
***
again and again
tempted to steal an orange
flawless blue morning
***
spring morning
how i fiddle with piano keys
missing her caress
Selected for Inbox 35. Thanks. hisashi
Blowing in the wind
the subtle scent of blossoms
dreams of spring
Rhythms of colour
in a mosaic of sounds…
April full moon
Cherry blossoms
gather round the full moon
scintillating stars
indulgent mother
cow licking her calf
till he shines
Selected for Inbox 35. Thanks. hisashi
Trees are finally beginning to leaf out,
And fruit trees are in bloom
Almost time for the first butterflies
And a migrating bird perched
on the nearby balcony railing
On this sunbright day
The trees still bare
The grass green but old
Only birds in motion
Waiting for summer
The ice and snow are melted
But tempestuous storms wreak havoc
And I pine alone
(Jane Wieman, Madison, Wisconsin)