XIV

a lot of chatter
in the leafless treesー
snowmelt

3 Responses to “XIV”

  1. Keith A. SIMMONDS Says:

    icicles
    in winter glow
    tumbling down

  2. John Dougill Says:

    chatter in leafless trees is nice, which gives one pause to think… a flock of sparrows perhaps, excited at the dripping bare branches as the snow melts beneath them… Snowmelt is an interesting conclusion, somehow with more finality than ‘snow melting’… it’s a nice Joycean kind of word too. I like this haiku!

  3. signs of spring

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