chatter in leafless trees is nice, which gives one pause to think… a flock of sparrows perhaps, excited at the dripping bare branches as the snow melts beneath them… Snowmelt is an interesting conclusion, somehow with more finality than ‘snow melting’… it’s a nice Joycean kind of word too. I like this haiku!
Icebox 
icicles
in winter glow
tumbling down
chatter in leafless trees is nice, which gives one pause to think… a flock of sparrows perhaps, excited at the dripping bare branches as the snow melts beneath them… Snowmelt is an interesting conclusion, somehow with more finality than ‘snow melting’… it’s a nice Joycean kind of word too. I like this haiku!
signs of spring